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  • Gone;;;;

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    Very nicely written, I liked it!^^
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:02am
  • TiaMariaCountMeIn.

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    I love the use of rhyming you did with this. You really know how to incorporate a lot of feelings into poems. (:
    January 8th, 2012 at 09:10pm
  • jewelia.

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    The rhyming is just...wow. I usually incorporate weird words with rhyming for the sake of it, but you did a fantastic job! I love the whole theme of the poem--it's unique and awesome.
    August 21st, 2011 at 02:30am
  • StarWeaver

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    I love the internal rhyming you had,
    it gave it an almost lyrical feel. (Lyrical in a tribal style.)

    It was a great poem.(:
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • iCoffee

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    This is quite good. I like the amount of emotion you put into it. I never was good at end rhyming. You seem to have it down pretty well
    April 24th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • ClockWithoutTime

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    this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!! I <3 IT!
    April 10th, 2011 at 05:57am
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