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  • FreyaBalance.

    FreyaBalance. (150)

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    This is really sweet, one error I saw where it said:
    If she knew how you where she'd be the same"

    Might be a small typo but change it to were :-) but all in all really good poem :-)
    April 15th, 2011 at 08:55pm
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