I love how this one flows :)
The first line really drew me in 'faces and figures'
And i also really liked the one word lines because they really helped me to try and relate to it i guess
Like the person bellow said, it is a sad sort of poem but i really like the way you've done it and showed the emotions in it :)
The first line really drew me in 'faces and figures'
And i also really liked the one word lines because they really helped me to try and relate to it i guess
Like the person bellow said, it is a sad sort of poem but i really like the way you've done it and showed the emotions in it :)