[i]Am I dreaminf,[/i] - Should that be "dreaming"?
This poem is really nice. It reads kind of fast at one of those breathless paces as odd as that sounds. Reading it slowly would definitely take away from it. It's sweet that you want this individual with you but also great that you're willing to let them be if it's what they want. Accepting that even if it hurts is better than trying to hold on. That usually hurts you both more. I love how emotion jumps at after each sentence too. It makes it even more enjoyable. Great job.
This poem is really nice. It reads kind of fast at one of those breathless paces as odd as that sounds. Reading it slowly would definitely take away from it. It's sweet that you want this individual with you but also great that you're willing to let them be if it's what they want. Accepting that even if it hurts is better than trying to hold on. That usually hurts you both more. I love how emotion jumps at after each sentence too. It makes it even more enjoyable. Great job.