~ This was amazing. The first person to get all 35 points.... XD CONGRATS! I love this poem immensely. It's sensual at first, in a way, and then it takes an unexpected turn. This isn't something I've seen in a poem in a long time, I love your style. Keep it up... XD Looking forward to reading more.
I'm really not sure what else to say, but I loved this so much I couldn't bring myself to leave the page without saying SOMETHING...