My head...Their world - Comments

Brian.Dominic. (100)

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This is very awesome baby grey. Lets see you can sing, your beautiful, and you the nicest girl ever and you can make very awesome poems man i'm so glade your mine baby. i love you

May 5th, 2011 at 11:20pm

TeenEmoCuttie (100)

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this is very interesting.....i like it!!<3

April 24th, 2011 at 04:16am

Shea Ryhai (100)

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This was interesting. Lot's of emotions expressed, almost like they were people and out of the writers control. Unique piece. Keep writing :)

April 24th, 2011 at 01:29am

Archdemon (100)

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I like this poem. its a little dark, but its really good. you are a good writer. the poem spoke to me, personally, seeing thats how i myself feel about my thoughts and emotional states. its a really good poem. =)

April 24th, 2011 at 01:11am