downs Are UPs In Life - Comments

Aww <3 This is a very cute poem. It made me smile and I love it. I love the HIGHS and the lows. haha. (lows was suppose to be tiny...I obviously can't do that.) Anyway, this was a very incredible poem. <3

I like this poem. I know that your formatting was meant to either a) give more meaning to the words b) imitate speech paterns c) both, but I don't really like it. I think it's just the way I read but it feels unnatural.
But that's not the point. The point is that this poem is actually great. I love the philosophy.

The rhythm of this poem is very nice. I like how you have the words formatted. The way the whole poem just [b]pops[/b] out at you. The meaning of the poem is simply marvelous. It lifts a person spirits and makes them want to smile. Thank you for the beauty and joy of this amazing piece of art! <3

I like the rhythm of this poem and the punctuation. It's a great poem

I'd like to mention again the punctuation has significance, look for words in all caps and look for words in all lowercase... it means something lol =]
(*pointing out the obvious*)

that is amazing