Thank you for entering this in my contest(:
Okay, uhuh, wow. I reaaaally liked this. Especially the whole 'dye stained sink, borrowed ciggarette, dried blood on a razor kind of girl' thing. That line just intruiged me so much. Thank you so much again.
Wow...I really like this. I like your writing style, but I think that sometimes you OVER-explain if that makes sense? This is beautiful though :) Amazing work!