This Boy-That Girl -complete - Comments

very nice and i loved it!! awesome ryme!! :D

OMG TY lauren i luv ya

(missing line one) like lines on the wires
(missing line two) thread stringing fear

then instead of putting in another line between the connected verse try this

step down and return to those streets
-we soak in this rain-
as we take this seat

:)

_love, Lauren_