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Shay;;
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This is beautifully written.
It reminds me of a girl I know, And of a past I can't regret.
What Im trying to say is, This shit is amazing, And after all, Peace finally found them.
-Shay
September 21st, 2011 at 10:44pm
The Doctor
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Nice poem. It's a very different style from mine, but I was fully engaged during the entire work.
September 14th, 2011 at 01:46am
jewelia.
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This was a really pretty poem(: One thing I do suggest, though, is maybe rearranging the formatting so that it's easier to read? Like this--
Warm euphoria beat upon her face
in the form of golden rays.
no wind to ruin the moment;
to send chills up her spine or raise goosebumps.
Oh well, that's just a thought xD This was a really beautiful poem though, good job! <3
August 21st, 2011 at 02:29am
ClockWithoutTime
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I love it my Dearest Kota:)
It's reallly good, and your an amaizing writer!
I LessThenThree You<3
May 16th, 2011 at 03:19am
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It reminds me of a girl I know, And of a past I can't regret.
What Im trying to say is, This shit is amazing, And after all, Peace finally found them.
-Shay