Death of Euphoria - Comments

This is beautifully written.
It reminds me of a girl I know, And of a past I can't regret.
What Im trying to say is, This shit is amazing, And after all, Peace finally found them.
-Shay

Nice poem. It's a very different style from mine, but I was fully engaged during the entire work.

This was a really pretty poem(: One thing I do suggest, though, is maybe rearranging the formatting so that it's easier to read? Like this--

Warm euphoria beat upon her face
in the form of golden rays.
no wind to ruin the moment;
to send chills up her spine or raise goosebumps.

Oh well, that's just a thought xD This was a really beautiful poem though, good job! <3

I love it my Dearest Kota:)
It's reallly good, and your an amaizing writer!
I LessThenThree You<3