This would have been even better if each three lines were one stanza, and added the sentence, ''And you'll see'' at the end as the third final line. Just a ssuggestion.
This is a nice poem and I like the length of each line; having only three or four words per line. It's a simple written poem about a person who sees how good that person they're talking about it while that person don't believe it or even worse know it. It's a great way to encourage that someone person.
I enjoyed this one. Well written and simple, something that most of us can relate to. Well done!
This is a nice poem and I like the length of each line; having only three or four words per line. It's a simple written poem about a person who sees how good that person they're talking about it while that person don't believe it or even worse know it. It's a great way to encourage that someone person.
I enjoyed this one. Well written and simple, something that most of us can relate to. Well done!
-Maria. :)