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  • VeiledInsanity

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    Wow, amazing imagery. Dark and emotional. I really like this poem, you did an awesome job.
    May 21st, 2011 at 01:24am
  • poeticbibliophile

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    A dark side. Sweet pain of bitterness. Cool. I like it. You make every reader hang on every word.
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:17pm
  • Free Bird.

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    i love how you took the whole concept of a vampire but made it yours in your own special way. good job. i also love the 'raped by immortality' line as well. :)
    May 15th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • mrsgregcarter

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    Wow! What an amazing poem! I love the line, "I've been raped by immortality." Great imagery!
    May 15th, 2011 at 07:19am
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