Where the Heart Is - Comments

Minnesota girls represent! Glad to see I'm not the only one here:)
And I loved how this told a story, and like in the personal story sense, where it's a story that was engraved on your heart, and I liked how I could feel it as I read.
I think it was well written, though there were some spots where it felt like it lists it's flow, but I think it was ok for this poem to do that, because the heart in it kept it going in the right direction
Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your stuff:)

Hey, I'm a country girl too and I know exactly what you mean. I crave the big cities but this little town in Tennessee I live in will always be my home. Again, amazing imagery. You're writing style is beautiful.

This was excellent. I can definitely relate, being raised in the country and all. Lovely message.

This created great imagery for me. This speaks to me. I've dealt with feelings similar to these. Love.

Listening to rockstar by nickelback while reading this,
for some reason it really helped me picture it

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

I love this poem! I felt like I was reading a short story, very nice descriptions! You have a great writing style!

Oh wows... Even though I live a gazillion miles away, I could almost see exactly what you were talking about when you speak about all of these places. It's a real beautiful poem :) it's actually kinda inspirational

It is unique definitely seems like a short narration or a thought than a poem yet at the same time if it where someone saying it in a story I imagine this descriptive phrase would accompany it [i]And the way she spoke about it was poetic. She told it in a way that made you transfixed and see it all..[/i]

yeah, i really liked this
ha i'll add you i suppose

This is a really pretty poem I really liked it, it was awsome :D