Not entirely sure if this is about suicide or photography - maybe both? It was amazing in the way that you described all the little things - insects, the heels clicking on the floor, etc. It might have been unoriginal if you hadn't added the photography aspect, and I like how it's unclear whether she's committing suicide or not - unless I'm just being stupid! I like how you didn't use capitals and how the emotion came across - it's a very sad, bleak poem and yet I loved it.
December 15th, 2011 at 10:55am
