I'm too tired to fight - Comments

this poem describes hw i feel a lot of the time

These types of poems are really interesting to me cause, well, I don't read them often. The whole poem really does sway my emotions, I can kind of feel how the writer feels, feel what the poems trying to portray. And let me tell ya, that's hard to to for me. I'm a pretty cold hearted. But this poem, wow. The structure is a bit off for me though. I like structure, it's my preference, but you made this work. Good job, this really is a good poem.

This is brilliantly wrote like an interesting short story. It's bursting with imagery and every word fits so well. The flow was so good, the emotion was greatly felt and as a reader I felt it.

Once again, another amazing poem. I think, via your poetry, you speak the words that are in the hearts of many others. You have a fantastic talent for poems.

I really like how you bring your poem to a conclusion with the title. It's a grand idea. <3

I like how it doesn't rhyme and it's simple thoughts that all tie together. I almost don't like the spacing but at the same time I feel it only emphasizes the separation of each line and then as the over all whole it belongs. It might have been a bit too forward but then again it's also what makes it a little charming because it's simple and [i]there[/i] instead of trying to be flamboyant. So I think it's pretty good but doesn't jump out.