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  • NightmareOnMyStreet

    NightmareOnMyStreet (100)

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    ~ I liked the poem, it was okay, the only thing is I don't think that you really captured the quote you picked. That and I wasn't that interested in the poem. It was very nice by itself, but if you attach the quote to it, then it becomes somewhat of a mess. I liked the message of the poem, but I don't think this was your greatest... I'm still looking forward to reading your next one! XD
    May 22nd, 2011 at 12:46am