Perfect Monster - Comments

Amazing poem loved it

i love this

wow. i loved this. so much.

Really good poem, sad but a situation many face (In different circumstances). I also agree with the commenter below me, your rhyme scheme was quite well done.

This is really amazing. Rhyme is such a hard thing to incorporate into a poem, and you do it perfectly. I's so clever how you managed to tell the story in a poem. Really well done x

O yeah and I liked it and understood your poem.

Sad.But I get the message is that you have to be wise with who your man is.Yeah that me.