wonderland grown; - Comments

Thank you for entering this wonderful poem in my contest(: Okay, I liked this poem, it was very imaginative. It was a bit long but that's okay. I actually have two favourite lines ^^

It was okay, a bit long and I think you should space it out more because right now it doesn't look appealing to read. If you space it out though, it'll look better.

More soon?

I quite like this poem. :)
It reads quite well, and it just has this air about it. It's intriguing for sure.
And I feel that the lack of capitalization works for the poem, I'm not too sure how, but I feel that it works really well.