This is a great poem, I have to echo with the word "clever," Very well thought out and written. I really love the imagery and flow of the entire thing.
June 11th, 2011 at 06:00am
Your Puppet Dancing - Comments
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This is.. Well.. Awesome! Hold up my deary. Hide the blade in a box and forget where it is. Try writing the word love where you cut.June 2nd, 2011 at 05:40pm
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Really good i love the rhyming. it really made it flow :)May 26th, 2011 at 01:59am
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yeah, this is so amazingMay 26th, 2011 at 01:24am
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thats really clever. :) i like it!May 26th, 2011 at 12:46am
