~ The poem is good, not as good as it could be, but good. I liked it. It's lacking in depth and and vocab, but it's not that big of a deal. And I wasn't that interested in it to tell you the truth. But god job, and I'm sorry for being so harsh, but I'm cracking down now that it's coming to the end of the competition, so good luck with next week, and again, sorry for the harshness....
~ The poem is good, not as good as it could be, but good. I liked it. It's lacking in depth and and vocab, but it's not that big of a deal. And I wasn't that interested in it to tell you the truth. But god job, and I'm sorry for being so harsh, but I'm cracking down now that it's coming to the end of the competition, so good luck with next week, and again, sorry for the harshness....