Simply Minded - Comments

MyBrokenRomance (100)

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aww i loved this
its so beautiful :)
keep up the good work!

July 23rd, 2011 at 05:44pm

Fearless to Fly (100)

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this one is sooo beautiful. It flows very well. It's a good example that a poem doesn't have to rime and yet can be a very good poem. I like your style of writing, I really do!

July 22nd, 2011 at 03:54pm

Tongue (100)

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I see a little girl when I read this :) I like the imagery and the stanzas

July 22nd, 2011 at 03:37pm

lavender eyes; (155)

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Location:: Canada

Gorgeous imagery! I like the firmness in the tone and your choice of words =)

July 19th, 2011 at 11:16pm

Dots (100)

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Location:: South Africa

Aw wow this is such a pretty poem :) I liked how it was so simple and so like...chilled but it has a really deep impact. Loving this poem

July 19th, 2011 at 11:09pm