Simply Minded - Comments

  • MyBrokenRomance

    MyBrokenRomance (100)

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    aww i loved this
    its so beautiful :)
    keep up the good work!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • Fearless to Fly

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    this one is sooo beautiful. It flows very well. It's a good example that a poem doesn't have to rime and yet can be a very good poem. I like your style of writing, I really do!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:54pm
  • Tongue

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    I see a little girl when I read this :) I like the imagery and the stanzas
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:37pm
  • lavender eyes;

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    Gorgeous imagery! I like the firmness in the tone and your choice of words =)
    July 19th, 2011 at 11:16pm
  • Dots

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    Aw wow this is such a pretty poem :) I liked how it was so simple and so like...chilled but it has a really deep impact. Loving this poem
    July 19th, 2011 at 11:09pm