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  • Currentvillageidiot

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    sod the spelling mistakes its beautiful
    June 3rd, 2011 at 11:48am
  • Rachel-Marie

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    I thought this was a great poem! I could picture a somebody sitting out by a fire, so you did a great job with description. I also love the last line, "No love lasts forever, but any love had, is the heart's greatest treasure." The only thing I noticed is I think 'breath' was supposed to be 'breathe'. Other than that, great job!
    June 3rd, 2011 at 05:54am
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