Phew. So your friend, LaHotness, came on and asked ever so kindly to read this poem. Normally I dismiss such demands but she went through it quite nicely and, at first I was a bit skeptical as the poetry quality average on this site is... less than thrilling, I'm glad to see my initial doubt has been rectified by this AMAZINGLY deep and soulful poem. I swear I can feel what it's like to be the person in this poem told from perspective.
Bravo. This is super good.