Tear me down - Comments

teen spirit. (100)

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This was beautiful, yet very sad. I know exactly how you feel. <3 The feeling really freakin sucks.
Anyways, this flowed very well, the chorus was amazing, your vocabulary in this was very nice also, although I do think that sometimes it was a bit repetitive. (I know that's how it's supposed to be, but maybe a little too much?) This was amazing, to be completely honest. Great job! <333

June 28th, 2011 at 10:38pm

xUnforgivableCursex (100)

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This is a beautiful poem! I totally relate. Lol. I've always felt like an outsider in high school because I never dated (save for one guy), I didn't fantasize over Twilight, and I never joined any extra curricular activities or anything of that sort. >>Lol. But I love your poem. OR lyrics. :)

June 24th, 2011 at 12:13am

So Mi Shught (100)

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Excellent. Nice flow. I like the chorus.

June 5th, 2011 at 11:51pm