Identity Crisis - Comments

@ SmilingScarlet
Thank you so much! I'm encouraged by the fact that you find any of my stuff thought provoking; that's all I want to accomplish.

Oh, damn. This is hauntingly good! This will most likely keep me up tonight, because constantly I'm always thinking about this, the human identity, what we claim to our name...I mean Jesus!

Well written, and really I think you should keep on writing.

I like this poem!
speaks so true and bluntly written yet not to the point where the wording causes people to be taken aback, but more so to reflecct. It's as if to say, "Is this true?", and honestly I think it is. I love the last line of the poem. It truly did bring everything together so beautifully, as if the poem a present and the ending the bow. Brilliantly written my friend, indeed so dark and morbid, yet seems to be leaving the reader with a thought(s) more along the lines of ponderment than depressiveness. Good job!

I adore poetry, and I especially adore poetry that points out things I hadn't thought of before. This did that for me. Its so incredibly profound.

That last line pulled this whole thing together. Without it, it would've been a very good poem, but with that, it was brilliant. Throughout, I was sort of thinking to myself, "Okay, where is this going?" because I knew that you had to be going somewhere with it - you always are. And then with those last few lines, the entire thing came together.

Oh I didn't realise that you wrote poetry; I didn't realise you wrote such bloody brilliant poetry.

This stunned me. I am also thoroughly impressed. I only WISH I could write poetry like this. It had a GREAT flow and stuck to a set rhythm very well. I enjoyed the fact that you capitalized the words each man's identity is- as if giving them a name and a person they are subjected to. Of course, that was probably the point. XD This definitely hit me had and I liked the imagery I got with it. Amazing job, my dear.

xo,

Angel 3

another well written insight on our weird human condition.
i loved this of course. i think i've said this before, but you have got yourself a fan. :3

I loved this, didnt see the last line comeing! but good poem well done :)