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  • RunawayRiotxx

    RunawayRiotxx (150)

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    I like your poem a lot..
    Don't ever think you don't deserve anyone though...
    I love it..
    Keep writing...
    April 24th, 2008 at 12:11am
  • elleisafrog46

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    "Why are you with me? I don't deserve anybody"... Awww. I simply love the poem. And the line I quoted, really hit me. Haha.
    April 13th, 2008 at 04:02pm
  • bar with a bite

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    i luv this poem. it makes me think about some stuff that happen in my life. u r a great poet.
    March 1st, 2008 at 05:04am
  • mia bell.

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    awww this is great.
    i love how you used the words and didn't make them rhyme.
    sometimes rhyming can ruin the poem.
    but i love this one.

    Kat
    February 23rd, 2008 at 04:37am
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