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  • Doctor Death Defying

    Doctor Death Defying (100)

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    Awww, this is sad... Marissa, you brought me down...
    February 23rd, 2008 at 09:04pm
  • lalaliar

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    I really liked these lines
    "My sight is disoriented,
    Your voice is getting soft."
    (= they're really quite descriptive
    but simple good job on the poem.
    February 23rd, 2008 at 06:38pm
  • VrgnaTechAngel

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    this is really good
    February 23rd, 2008 at 06:14pm
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