Girl She Once Was - Comments

I loved the rhyme scheme you had goin’ on. :) A couple mistakes:

- [i]Counting down till its time for her to leave.[/i] There’d be an apostrophe after “it’s” because you’re saying it is.
- [i]Its easier that way for her to grieve.[/i] Same thing with “Its”.

This was a poem I could relate to quite a bit and really you just did an awesome job with it. I can tell poems are your expertise. :) <33

I understand this.
I like your choice in words, makes the poem sound well put together.
I like that there is a story untold behind it. Leaves you guessing.
This is all around a great poem.

Sad, but it says so much. I like it a lot. It's simple and sweet despite the sadness hidden behind those words. Great job =)