Agreeing with everyone else, The rhyming was really good. ^_^
June 26th, 2011 at 04:57am
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its rymes greatJune 24th, 2011 at 06:22pm
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that was great! good rhyming :DJune 14th, 2011 at 02:15am
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This is so clever,you pretty much nailed it perfectly,this is beautiful:)June 13th, 2011 at 05:07am
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The rhyme scheme you used is something I've never seen, and it is genius. It keeps a rhythm that just...fits(?) with this tone of poem. 6 of the same rhymes followed up by couplets until the end! I'd never woulda thought it.
The poem itself seems to have an edge of disappointment, a pinch of anger, and a sense of serenity which is a weird combo but I like it.(:
Very good poem!June 12th, 2011 at 04:22pm -
It's like a bittersweet goodbye <3June 12th, 2011 at 03:40pm
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You got some talent... seriously.June 11th, 2011 at 09:39pm
