Our Time Is Running Out - Comments

  • NightmareOnMyStreet

    NightmareOnMyStreet (100)

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    40/35
    ~ This was a good poem, not your best, obviously rushed, but I still liked it. I did feel like you were rushing, and since the whole point of the poem was that time was running out, I really liked it... anyways... lacking in vocab....
    +10 points for being under half an hour... good job! XD <#
    June 16th, 2011 at 02:00am
  • JeremyTheThirteenth

    JeremyTheThirteenth (105)

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    Wow, :D
    June 16th, 2011 at 01:54am