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  • Gone;;;;

    Gone;;;; (100)

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    I liked it, its pretty deep;)
    November 29th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • Addicted 2 trees

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    I thought this was really good =) Your a skilled chick =D
    June 18th, 2011 at 01:57pm
  • StarWeaver

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    Couplets were very nice-the emotion you put into the verses are really heard.
    And this is just me; please don't take this the wrong way.

    But the intensity of the anger that you put through was lost with the last line. "Fucking" really wrecked this, because to me poetry is suppose to be the artful knife, not the vulgar one. Though many probably disagree.

    You still did a great job with this, nevertheless.(:
    June 18th, 2011 at 08:52am
  • whoathere

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    this is seriously <3
    June 18th, 2011 at 08:43am
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