Au revoir. - Comments

I liked it, its pretty deep;)

I thought this was really good =) Your a skilled chick =D

Couplets were very nice-the emotion you put into the verses are really heard.
And this is just me; please don't take this the wrong way.

But the intensity of the anger that you put through was lost with the last line. "Fucking" really wrecked this, because to me poetry is suppose to be the artful knife, not the vulgar one. Though many probably disagree.

You still did a great job with this, nevertheless.(:

this is seriously <3