Imprisoned Within This Time Machine (Memory) - Comments

  • URAFever

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    Lovely.
    June 28th, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • insertclevername

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    well i meant the guy who is like " i can do better" and whatever. unless you know him or something. but i still lovvee it!!
    March 9th, 2008 at 08:10pm
  • freak my spork

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    I loved this! You're really, really good with the figurative language. So many different scenarios came to mind when I was reading this, and I felt like I could really connect with the poem. Awesome job!
    March 6th, 2008 at 04:22am
  • insertclevername

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    umm who is that guy?
    anyway its AWESOME of course
    ily
    February 27th, 2008 at 12:17am
  • UNNEGLECTED_DARK

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    but yet still good
    February 25th, 2008 at 03:54am
  • UNNEGLECTED_DARK

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    not better then i can write and i don't need effort
    February 25th, 2008 at 03:53am
  • anger management

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    Nice, i like it. A heck of a lot better than anything i can write.
    February 25th, 2008 at 03:51am