I'll be honest, the majority of this is rather rambling, more like a drabble than a poem, but it's really good nonetheless. Some great images all the way through, and I really liked this part:
'I’m the mirror you admire
The image that sets your pride on fire
I’m the glass from which you drink
You’re emptier than you think'
This bit was perfect. I'd love to see more like this :)
And I like it, btw. :P