Another Tragedy - Comments

Great poem
love the point of view your writing from
the usual one side of the story, the person who wants to die
is quite cliche'
love how you branched out
and looked at this a different way
beautiful work

I am not sure, how I should feel about this poem,
Are you sad? You sound indifferent.
Suicide in this form seems to annoy you, quite a bit.

It is still an intersting poem. <333

I thought this was really good, mainly because it's not written from the point of view of a suicidal person, it's simple but it's a strong message. You really showed the other side of suicide which isn't glamorous at all, from a different view than most tend to write about. "So much for fifteen minutes of fame//To this day no one knows your name." It's a really powerful line because if you think about it, which you must have done to write it, it's so damn [b]true[/b]. Awesome poem.