Stay in Deep - Comments

Wow, this was really powerful. The lyrics were really good. It felt so heartbreaking. I could just imagine a music video playing and words just itching into a girl’s skin and her just looking at herself in the mirror and crying. This was beautiful!

These lyrics is just so good. My favorite was the chorus it made feel slight tingle in my chest. Maybe I was experiencing what was inside the song. That's how lyrics suppose to feel like you can experience what the writer is feeling either they sing the chords or not. All I can say is that your good what you do, Keep on writing on.
-Pinkly Smooth

I just had to check out some of your other work. Still impressed. How are you doing this? :O

Once again, it's a powerful piece, and I absolutely adore it. Dark enough for an obvous edge, but not overdone. And the chorus is excellent again. First two lines are my favorite. You are a really, really talented writer! :)