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  • lovelybleedingheart

    lovelybleedingheart (100)

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    Great poem
    July 7th, 2011 at 01:37am
  • jewelia.

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    This was a very lovely poem(: I think you should capitalize the first letter of the first line.

    Do you know that she cries herself to sleep every night
    and wishes she were never born?

    I also think that you should put a question mark at the end of the second line. Great poem, though(:
    July 7th, 2011 at 01:35am
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