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  • Ariveria

    Ariveria (100)

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    :O You're really good at writing poems, or songs. Smooth rhyming, excellent rhythm, relatable, and memorable. Like the commenter below said, the lines with the moon and stars are really, really pretty. Excellent job. :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 12:31pm
  • psychotic secrets;

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    Wow. You are excellent at writing poems :) You should write more, I love this.

    I really like this, "So I’d pluck The Moon from the sky for you, And I’d spell your name in the stars, it’s true." It's beautiful.

    You are a great writer.
    July 11th, 2011 at 11:51pm