Days of Happiness, Days of Pain - Comments

Love this poem!!

seriously amazing, i love it. hits close to home, ya know? Great job

Its actually really catchy!

Days of hope, days of bad luck,
Today, I just don't give a fuck.

and

Days where I smile, days where I'm crying
Another day, barely surviving.

really speak to me. I love the poem all together, but with everything I've been through recently, those really tugged at my heart.

Yeah...I guess alooot of ppl can actually relate to this...everyday is different ...some days you're so happy and thankful for everything and the other you just wanna stay in bed all day ...I loved it :)
I'd be glad if u read my first poem 'Put Down That Knife ' ,I need some serious feedback :D

[i]Nights of light, nights of dark,
Another scar, I've left my mark.[/i]

and

[i]Everything's the same, in different ways.
And life is made of wrong and rights..[/i]

Those were my favorite lines. But I love the whole poem in general.
It's brilliant, really. I can relate so much to it. Awesome job! (:

This was really good. :)

Amazing! Very relatable, great work!

im going thru something like this atm :'(

Wow this is great.!

I can totally relate to this. You know when this is a great poem when people other than yourself can relate. It's very well written too! (: