liar - Comments

V thaks,i'll fix mistakes asap

I like how this poem ends and begins on the same line. It's a nice wrap-up; Hun, is Hon. Though. I know it doesn't look right but it is. Also, capital letters do a world of good in making a poem visually pleasing.. Such as a capital O on Oh. Also, repeating the word lie, and liar is ineffective. Maybe find a different word to convey the same feeling? I still like it though, for a short jaunty poem. Your written style is very distinct and I enjoy it very much!