retirement home - Comments

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I wrote this after visiting the home to do some voluntary work and one woman said it's worse than hell

Aww, this poem was sad. It really makes the reader think and it shows that more appreciation should go toward old people because it's obvious a nursing home would be a horrible place to stay in and it's really horrible that their kids, that they have raised for years, would just chuck their mother or father in such a place. Again, another great poem!

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This has a bit more rhythm to it than your most recent one. 'Its' should be 'It's', but that's the only mistake. Very sad.

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Oh wow, that's so incredibly sad! It kinda makes me appreciate my gran all that more