Final Goodbye (promise) - Comments

It's a beautiful poem. Very well-written and realistic yet so sad at the same time. I like how the promise is repeated, it gave a great sense of emotion. It's really good. Keep it up. :)

The repetition of that one promise line was really magnificent. It really gave the overall poem a sense of betrayal or anger. Well, that's what I got out of it. The person saying goodbye seemed to be angry at the person he/she was leaving. I found it really cool that I could sense the emotion within this poem.

I feel that really good poets can make the emotion so apparent like in this poem. Good job.

This is really good =)

this is really sad but it's beautiful at the same time reminds me of someone I know.

This is good. It's sad, but very good.

Wow, this is really dark and sad and realistic. I really feel like I'm looking directly into your soul. That's when you know someone's a great writer =]
And it seems like it would make a great song.
Keep up the good writing! ;D

Dark and deep, but I like it and appreciate that you are a good darker writer :) I love the repetition "We promised didn't we?"! Overall amazing to say the least!

Ish so sad! :(