stop running away - Comments

  • MyBrokenRomance

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    V thank you <3
    October 9th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • pocahontas.

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    This reminds me of someone I know. I really like it. It's always good to read something you can relate to.
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:52pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    V thanks :)
    August 2nd, 2011 at 01:52pm
  • KnifeInTheCrayonBox

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    Aw, this is really cute. I like it because it sounds slightly stalker-ish when you say, "Don't run away ever again," Lol, anyways it's really well-written. Short, sweet, and to the point. I can also totally relate to it! =)
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:07pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    Thaaanks :D
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:13pm
  • Author

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    This is cute. I like the way you piled on the thoughts as though it were actually your mind thinking one on top of the other. The punctuation is also very effective. I can't think of anything to correct this poem because I liked it; especially how it ends on a question.
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:12pm