i haven't changed - Comments

V thanks =3

VV
thanks =3
I do try to write from the heart <3

Your style is so rough, and litteral. Very unique, very interesting. I feel the emotion which is what I look for in a poem anyways keep it up :D

Again, another poem that reminds me of my life. You have a way with words, dear. Your style is different, but it is really nice. Keep it up.

V it sucks,doesn't it
it's annoying
at least it's over for me now =')

Oh my God. I know exactly how you feel.

V thanks,this is like a personal poem about having to change to keep people happy

Then opening verse is excellent because it gives voice go he poem.

Also watch your capitalization in the title and towards the end.

This is a great poem because in high school I felt like I changed for people. You did good with this :)

V thanks!
i'll fix up mistakes asap

Alright. A few things about this poem.

1. The beginning is great. It sets of a perfect mood for the idea you're trying to convey and the word choice is good-
2. Up until you repeat decide twice. When writing a poem, you want to keep it fresh. Repeating words causes a problem with the brain because it doesn't keep the sound flowing; it sort of stunts it.
3. When you Spelled "'Cause" as "Cuz," it's a distraction. Correct spelling is important unless you're intending to use the bad spelling as a pun. That's just my take.

All over it's a good idea and a sad poem, and with a little touching up it could do great!