fake friendship - Comments

V um thanks? :)

VV
thank you :)
i was going through hell,so i wrote it out of all the anger that i was put through =)
again,thanks :)

I think a lot of people can relate to this and just the fact that you wrote it with a lack of poetic devices, some poets may not like it however, once you find your crowd they will love you!

I could easily tell what this was about and that's important to me in a poem. It was strong and I could feel your anger at this girl. This was wonderful, I assure you of that.

V thanks nathan

i love this one :D

V thanks!!
i will!!

I like this poems. You can really feel the emotions in it. It is also relatable and I guess that's why I like it so much :))

Keep writing poems! :D

V thanks!

I really like the emotions conveyed in this poem, bug I think that if you used proper grammar it would have a much stronger impact.

I have been in this sort of thing before though so it's quite relatible and I
sure many others felt the same

V thanks!! i'll fix mistakes now!!!

I really find myself liking this poem, since I had been in a place similar than this. It got to the point that I would [i]not[/i] tell my friend anything, just so that I kept my look and she didn't try to take it over. There is no doubt in my mind that this poem will be relateable for many people.

[i]Especially when you tell without talking to me[/i] Maybe I am just reading this wrong, but how could she tell without speaking with her? I'm sure it's just a misunderstanding, but I found this confusing.

There were a few mistakes, such as "truely" does not have an "e" in it, and a few time you missed capitalizing "i" but other than that, all was good:)

There is definitely a considerable amount of emotion in this:) Good work