Ashamed - Comments

This is amazing.I really felt the power in the few words.The begining really stuck out to me,and I loved it.The I am ashamed being repeated feels like it brings the whole poem together,and it Shows The readers how ashamed you are even though it's so hard to stop.Terrific job on this.The power in so little words is amazing.The beauty,and sadness in the words stuck out.I loved it.

I love this. It was short, but brilliant. Everything was just so straight forward. This is definitely one of my favorite poems on Mibba. You did amazing, and the repetitive things actually were awesome, the concept, and wording, an detail to this is absolutely beautiful. Amazing job.<3

This is really great. Probably my favorite out of the ones I've read from you. Sometimes repetitive things get annoying but not here. The repeating of "I am ashamed" almost feels as if it's NECESSARY to be there. As if the poem would be nothing without it. It flowed beautifully and the concept was heart breaking, yet wonderful. Really great job here.