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  • Yella

    Yella (100)

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    First of all, thank you for entering my contest Imagine.Create.Submit.(: I will PM the winners and post them on the contest forum as well.

    This is raw. I am speechless. I can only figure that this person has truly been hurt by someone she loved, but what I'm sure of is that this person has experienced tremendous pain that in this persons mind can only be taken away by suicide. This poem is relatable in the sense that we all have hurt and we all will, eventually. I like it a lot:)
    November 3rd, 2011 at 08:55am
  • ClassicRomantic

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    What a wonderful poem!
    Gloriously written and it flows so well, each word is perfectly placed.
    Brilliant! This should be published!
    August 8th, 2011 at 07:14am
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