You killed me. - Comments

  • HoskiSpider

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    WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT!
    August 26th, 2011 at 05:12am
  • loopy lupin

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    I love how raw it is, and all the motion put into it <3

    v. You. What the fuck is wrong with you.
    August 24th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • Dahnie

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    Haha, I wish I could kill you.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • nautical.

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    I dont usually read poetry, so I am not exactly sure what to be looking for.
    But I liked how it was dark and everything and it wasnt in traditional style. Heh, but yeah, I liked it.
    August 22nd, 2011 at 04:27pm
  • divine;

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    Um very strong meaning behind this poem. Just a worming you have to be careful about the rating system. You can't have a poem as rated G and put down the F-bomb. So I would suggest going up a rating or fixing the poem to make it G.
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:19pm